
First off, why would Sparkle with some punk-ass not-vampire kid in the first place? And while I can understand his angst at being sold into slavery, etc., his FATHER apparently had the motivation to check facts, so why didn't he?
As for the rest, eh, whatever. The romance was ok, the drama between Sparkle and Ganymede pretty much overpowered everything though.
One other thing - just how many Mackenzie vampires are grandsons and great-grandsons of Loki?