Pluses - the alien mates aren't the abductors
It's an interesting world
Minuses - first person isn't a favorite of mine.
Things I let slide - the H demonstrating his cunning lingual skills on an unconscious heroine. He does seem to be kindof like a neanderthal so I would assume he didn't know any better.
Things that made little sense - 250 years in the past, his ancestors crash landed on the planet. His people are clueless. of this. Really? No story tellers, no busted tech?