First, let me say that I'm not overly fond of having an angel for a H or h. At the same time, this one WORKED. How, I don't know. Maybe because the way it was developed. Not sure. Then again, it could have been the humor of his losing feathers all over the place.That the h discovered her adoptive father was her biological father... and that her adoptive mother didn't take out her resentment on her (which could have happened - it's hard to be rational in the face of a betrayal of that magnitude) added layers.
The twins... poor kids.
I did have a question about the H's surname - Godricson doesn't sound very Irish to me.
